What do you like most about being alone?

2015-09-10 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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I can take a rest. I'm a father so If I go back home after a work, I can't watch the television comfortably while laying down. Because I have to play with my son and I have to help my wife housework. Sometime I am really hoping that I am alone.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Alex! Thank you for your composition today! Everybody needs some personal time. I hope you\'ll find ways to enjoy some time for yourself. Take care and stay happy! T. JanE ^^ I can take a rest. >> I can take some rest. I\'m a father so If I go back home after a work, I can\'t watch the television comfortably while laying down. >> I\'m a father, so when I come back home from work, I can\'t watch the television comfortable while laying down. Because I have to play with my son and I have to help my wife housework. >> I have to play with my son and I have to help my wife with house chores. Sometime I am really hoping that I am alone. >> Sometimes I really hope that I could be alone.

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