What do you like most about my hometown
학생이 쓴 원문
I have lived in my hometown for my whole life and i still live in my hometown
So my family and almost my freinds are in my hometown
it is the most good thing
And the another good thing is that it is not very complicated like seoul
강사 첨삭
WRITING TASK: What do you like most about your hometown?
So my family and almost my freinds are in my hometown
it is the most good thing.
And the another good thing is that it is not very complicated like seoul
I have lived in my hometown for my whole life and i still live in my hometown
>> I have lived in my hometown for my whole life and I still live in my hometown now.
So my family and almost my freinds are in my hometown
>> So my family and almost all of my friends are in my hometown.
it is the most good thing.
>> it\'s a really good thing.
And the another good thing is that it is not very complicated like seoul
>> And another good thing is that it is not very complicated to live there like in Seoul.
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