What do you like most about your bedroom? Answer in no more than five (5) sentences.
학생이 쓴 원문
When I s[이름]p, body pillows are the most important things. I always s[이름]p with them on both my arms. They make me feel cozy.
And I have no TV in my room, so I use IPAD. When I watch it, Ipad stand. I can watch drama with lying down in my bed.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, [이름]!^^
Thank you so much for finding time to accomplish your homework.
I have made some modifications that you can check later on.
We can talk about this in class if you have questions. See you then!
Have a good day!
__T. May[이름]n :)
When I s[이름]p, body pillows are the most important things.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: Body pillows are the most crucial items to me when I s[이름]p.
I always s[이름]p with them on both my arms. They make me feel cozy.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: They are usually on both of my arms as I s[이름]p. They make me feel at ease.
And I have no TV in my room, so I use IPAD.
And I have no TV in my room, so I use IPAD.
>>> I have no TV in my room, so I use my iPAD.
When I watch it, Ipad stand. I can watch drama with lying down in my bed.
>>> When I watch it, I use an iPAD stand. I can watch dramas while lying down in bed.
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