What do you like most about your job?
학생이 쓴 원문
What do you like most about your job?
I like my job i do. i can manage a engineering project as engineer. because i should can handle money, machine drawing, schedule. so i do project manager as engineer. and i have opportunity to work at other country by engineering project. so i can experience a lot of thing. that\'s why i love this job. and that\'s why i learn English.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Tony.
I\'m glad you checked on your homework. I really appreciate you coming up with your own sentences now and I\'m sure you\'ll start learning how to write and compose essays as you do these homework.
I like my job i do.
>>> I do like my job.
i can manage a engineering project as engineer. because i should can handle money, machine drawing, schedule.
>>> I can manage an engineering project as an engineer because I can handle money, machine drawings, and my schedule.
so i do project manager as engineer.
>>> As an engineer, I also have the responsibility of a project manager.
and i have opportunity to work at other country by engineering project.
>>> And I have an opportunity to work in other countries through my projects.
so i can experience a lot of thing. that\'s why i love this job. and that\'s why i learn English.
>>> So I get to experience a lot of things that\'s why I love this job and it\'s the very reason I\'m learning English.
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