What do you like most about your own culture?

2021-01-27 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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We have a culture of sharing food in special day. and, they are say good things to each other. There is a culture that is willing to help when there are difficult neighbors.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. [이름]tina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


We have a culture of sharing food in special day.

>> We have a culture of sharing food on a special day.

and, they are say good things to each other.

>> We also say good things to each other.

There is a culture that is willing to help when there are difficult neighbors.

>> This is a culture that is willing to help when their neighbors are in a difficult situation.

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