What do you like the most about having a get together?

2018-09-27 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

학생이 쓴 원문

I like to get people like my friends or my family together. When we get together, we usually eat and catch up. It makes me feel good and stress out. getting together makes us feel closer and know each other more. That's the most I like. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름]! Thank you for this. A get together is definitely a fun activity. Yes, it could be tiring because of the preparations and all the things you have to do. However, it is a good opportunity to socialize, chat and update yourself on others\' affairs.

- T. Beth

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I like to get people like my friends or my family together.

>>>    CORRECT.
When we get together, we usually eat and catch up.

>>>    CORRECT. 

It makes me feel good and stress out.

>>>     It makes me feel good and relieves my stress.

getting together makes us feel closer and know each other more.

>>>   CORRECT. (Getting together makes us feel closer and know each other more.) 

That\'s the most I like.
>>>   That\'s what I like the most. 

Thank you.

>>>    CORRECT. 

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