What do you like the most about the South Korean educational system? Share your answer in a few sent
학생이 쓴 원문
I loved the club activities. All subjects were taught are compulsory, but the club is the only thing that I could choose. I was interested in the art and joined the calligraphy class. When I had a tough time to study, I could endure because of it.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Judy!
Clubs enrich our school experiences and make us have a lighter side of going to school. Most of all, we love what we do in these groups. So, I hope that you could still find one in your university.
Thank you for writing me this long homework! I hope that you can join more art activities when you can. Also, watch a lot of art videos when you cannot.
See you later.
-T. Donna =)
I loved the club activities.
>> Correct!
Or: I love club activities.
All subjects were taught are compulsory, but the club is the only thing that I could choose.
>> All subjects that were taught were compulsory, but the club is the only thing that I could choose.
I was interested in the art and joined the calligraphy class.
>> I was interested in the arts and joined the calligraphy class.
When I had a tough time to study, I could endure because of it.
>> Correct!
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