What do you like to do at the sea?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like to do a sand play at the sea because it is very funny and safe,and I like to do the sea the raning because
running is freash.
강사 첨삭
Hi Mat,
It\'s really fun to sand play on the beach Mat. It promotes creativity and imagination – using wet sand to mold sand into different shapes and objects, use colored sand to make patterns, or use a fork, small rake, or pencil to draw designs in the sand. Enjoy playing and running at the beach.
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I like to do a sand play at the sea because it is very funny and safe,and I like to do the sea the raning because
running is freash.
>> I like to sand play on the beach because it is very fun and safe, and I also like to run on the beach because
running makes me feel fresh.
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I like to do a sand play at the sea because it is very funny and safe,and I like to do the sea the raning because
running is freash.
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