What do you like to do outside of work?
학생이 쓴 원문
Apart from work, I enjoy taking a stroll to nearby places. I usually have an hour-long walk to the nearby river or park. During this time, I can separate myself from workloads and free myself from various matters and concerns. I believe sparing my time for more physical activities made me mentally and physically healthy by relieving stresses from the daily routine. Due to the pandemic, I do not have a place for exercise. Accordingly, a walk was the only outdoor activity I could do at the beginning of the lockdowns. This hobby was crucial to me because I could keep myself away from burning out from many workloads. Physical strength enables me to withstand bombarding customer calls at my first job as a customer service associate. Walking allowed me to equip myself with persistency and mental toughness, which have prepared me to be flexible in the fast-paced global business market.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Aciel! Happy weekend!
Apart from work, I enjoy taking a stroll to nearby places.
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I usually have an hour-long walk to the nearby river or park.
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During this time, I can separate myself from workloads and free myself from various matters and concerns.
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>>> OR: During this time, I can detach myself from workloads and free myself from various matters and concerns.
I believe sparing my time for more physical activities made me mentally and physically healthy by relieving stresses from the daily routine.
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Due to the pandemic, I do not have a place for exercise.
>>> OR: Due to the pandemic, I do not have a place to exercise.
Accordingly, a walk was the only outdoor activity I could do at the beginning of the lockdowns.
>>> Accordingly, a walk was the only outdoor activity I could do at the beginning of the lockdown.
This hobby was crucial to me because I could keep myself away from burning out from many workloads.
>>> correct
Physical strength enables me to withstand bombarding customer calls at my first job as a customer service associate.
>>> correct
Walking allowed me to equip myself with persistency and mental toughness, which have prepared me to be flexible in the fast-paced global business market.
>>> correct
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