What do you like to eat in your favorite restaurant?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like to eat pizza in Rannis pizza. i love pizza, because you know, soft cheeze, pepperoni, ham and olive make harmony in my mouth. i mean it is so mouth-watering!! if i drink beer with pizza, i feel like im in haven.
that why my favorite restaurant is Rannis pizza, it is locationed in right next to my city so i can go there when i want. but it is little expensive. Pizza price is affordable but expensive for me. so when i get a job, i will go there every week
강사 첨삭
Hello Robin!
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I like to eat pizza in Rannis pizza.
>>I like to eat pizza in Rannis Pizzeria.
i love pizza, because you know, soft cheeze, pepperoni, ham and olive make harmony in my mouth.
>> I love pizza because soft cheese, pepperoni, ham, and olives have good harmony in my mouth.
i mean it is so mouth-watering!! if i drink beer with pizza, i feel like im in haven.
>>I mean it is so mouth-watering! If I drink beer with pizza, I feel like I\'m in heaven.
that why my favorite restaurant is Rannis pizza, it is locationed in right next to my city so i can go there when i want.
that why my favorite restaurant is Rannis pizza, it is locationed in right next to my city so i can go there when i want.
>> That\'s why my favorite restaurant is Rannis Pizzeria. It is located right next to my city so I can go there whenever I want.
but it is little expensive.
>> But it is a little expensive.
Pizza price is affordable but expensive for me.
>> Pizza\'s price is so affordable but expensive for me.
so when i get a job, i will go there every week
>> So when I get a job, I will go there every week.
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