What do you like to the most today? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like to the most today, first, today is Friday so tomorrow is weekend.
Second, I eat the rice noodles with my family.
Third, I watched TV and sleep in the Iiving room with my brother.
강사 첨삭
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Jean~~
What do you like to do the most today? Why?
I like to the most today, first, today is Friday so tomorrow is weekend.
>> The things I like most today are, first, today is Friday so tomorrow is the weekend.
Second, I eat the rice noodles with my family.
>> Second, I eat rice noodles with my family.
Third, I watched TV and sleep in the Iiving room with my brother.
>> Third, I watch TV and sleep in the living room with my brother.
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