What do you like to watch on TV?
학생이 쓴 원문
In the TV, there are so many programs. And, there can be fun programs that I like, but there can be boring programs to me. As a matter of fact, I don’t have TV in my house because my mom and dad don’t want me to waste much time in watching TV. So when I visited my grandparent\'s house with a big TV, I always watched what I wanted to watch on TV. When I watch TV in my grandparent\'s house, my mom says to me that I am so much into it. However, I have more programs that I want to watch during my staying in my grandmother\'s because at home I can’t watch TV. I like to watch comedy show on TV because when I laugh loudly, I can relieve stress. The comedy show is my favorite TV program. But my brother doesn\'t like this program, so sometimes I argue with him which program to see because our favorite programs are totally different. Fortunately, my dad also likes to watch comedy show that he sticks up for me.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Rana!
Comedy programs are always the best to relieve stress. I also understand why you\'re parents don\'t allow you to watch TV. Anyway, thank you for sharing and see you later.
Have a nice day!
~T. Roanne ^_^
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In the TV, there are so many programs. >> On the TV, there are so many programs.
And, there can be fun programs that I like, but there can be boring programs to me.
>> Correct!
As a matter of fact, I don’t have TV in my house because my mom and dad don’t want me to waste much time in watching TV.
>> As a matter of fact, I don’t have a TV in my house because my mom and dad don’t want me to waste much time in watching TV.
So when I visited my grandparent\'s house with a big TV, I always watched what I wanted to watch on TV.
>> Correct!
When I watch TV in my grandparent\'s house, my mom says to me that I am so much into it.
>> Correct!
However, I have more programs that I want to watch during my staying in my grandmother\'s because at home I can’t watch TV.
>> However, I have more programs that I want to watch during my stay in my grandmother\'s because at home I can’t watch TV.
I like to watch comedy show on TV because when I laugh loudly, I can relieve stress.
>> Correct!
The comedy show is my favorite TV program.
>> Correct!
But my brother doesn\'t like this program, so sometimes I argue with him which program to see because our favorite programs are totally different.
>> But my brother doesn\'t like this program, so sometimes I argue with him, which program to see because our favorite programs are totally different.
Fortunately, my dad also likes to watch comedy show that he sticks up for me.
>> Fortunately, my dad also likes to watch a comedy show that he sticks up for me.
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