What do you love doing with your relatives?
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Hello Rana!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
With my relatives, I do many things such as board game, swimming in the pool, set up by my grandfather in the summer, and more.
>> With my relatives, I do many things such as play board games, swimming in the pool that is set up by my grandfather in the summer, and more.
However, I love going on a trip with my relatives.
>> CORRECT!
Whenever I Take a tour with my relatives, I can feel happiness and pleasure.
>> Whenever I go on a tour with my relatives, I can feel happiness and pleasure.
And I am so close with my cousins that I have awesome time with them every time I see them.
>> I am so close with my cousins that I have an awesome time with them every time I see them.
Anyway, I love my relatives.
>> CORRECT!
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