What do you miss about your hometown?
학생이 쓴 원문
What do you miss about your hometown?
Pyeongteak is countryside than chunan. so I can\'t see young man. and i miss city culture. For example Pub, young people ...
I miss my hometown friends. they have a job. so long time no see my friends. because they are very busy.
강사 첨삭
Hello Tony,
I\'m glad you made time to do your homework. Thank you for that. ^^ Here are the corrections:
Pyeongteak is countryside than chunan. so I can\'t see young man.
>>> Pyeongtaek is more of a countryside than Cheonan so I haven\'t met anyone my age.
and i miss city culture. For example Pub, young people ...
>>> And I miss the urban culture like going to pubs and hanging out with younger people.
I miss my hometown friends.
>>> CORRECT!
they have a job. so long time no see my friends. because they are very busy.
>>> They are also busy with work so I haven\'t seen them for a long time.
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