What do you miss most about being a child?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was young, I had various hairstyles like double hair buns.
But these days, if I try double hair buns, I may get everyone\'s attention.
And it doesn\'t even look as good as it was when it was young.
So I miss being able to do various hairstyles the most.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! :)
But these days, if I try double hair buns, I may get everyone\'s attention.
And it doesn\'t even look as good as it was when it was young.
So I miss being able to do various hairstyles the most.
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
When I was young, I had various hairstyles like double hair buns.
>> CORRECT!
But these days, if I try double hair buns, I may get everyone\'s attention.
>> But these days, if I do the double hair buns, I may get everyone\'s attention.
And it doesn\'t even look as good as it was when it was young.
>> And it doesn\'t even look as good as it was when I was young.
So I miss being able to do various hairstyles the most.
>> So, I miss being able to do various hairstyles the most when I was young.
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