What do you miss most about your childhood?
학생이 쓴 원문
I always have not enough time to play. After enter the company I always busy.
So, Nowadays I travel on weekend. Next weekend, I will go to Gyeongju with my parents. Gyeongju is historical city. I will see historical heritage a lot and eat delicious food a lot.
강사 첨삭
You deserve to have a break, Emily! I am sure your parents would be so happy for your trip!-Faith-
I always have not enough time to play. >> CORRECT
After enter the company I always busy.
>> After entering the company, I am always busy.
So, Nowadays I travel on weekend.
So, Nowadays I travel on weekend.
>> So, nowadays I travel on weekend.
Next weekend, I will go to Gyeongju with my parents.
>> CORRECT
OR Next weekend, I will have a trip to Gyeongju with my parents
Gyeongju is historical city.
>> CORRECT
I will see historical heritage a lot and eat delicious food a lot.
>> I will see historical heritages a lot and eat delicious food too.
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