What do you mostly look forward to when you enter a company? Why?
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Team chemistry with coworkers in a company is one of the most important factors both earning profit and sustaining each colleague\'s work efficiency. When I was working in the interior company, our department was closely related with designers who used our office together. We used to have dinner monthly and every time was a great opportunity to listen their personal concern which was helpful accelerator to collaborate in office afterwards. I could communicate more naturally to seniors and the working condition felt better with a wider perspective on my senior\'s hidden supports. The moment I am writing this short experience, firmed chemistry was possible because all of office members were open-minded to gather. I wish I could meet people in a future company who are always opened to communicate together.
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Hello Mathew,
Great composition! Keep it up :)
~ T. Demi ^^
Great composition! Keep it up :)
~ T. Demi ^^
>> Team chemistry with my co-workers is one of the most important factors in earning profit and sustaining each other\'s work efficiency.
When I was working in the interior company, our department was closely related with designers who used our office together.
>> When I was working at an interior company, our department was closely related to designers who were using the office with us.
>> When I was working at an interior company, our department was closely related to designers who were using the office with us.
We used to have dinner monthly and every time was a great opportunity to listen their personal concern which was helpful accelerator to collaborate in office afterwards.
>> We used to have monthly dinners, during which we listened to personal concerns and found ways to collaborate in the office.
>> We used to have monthly dinners, during which we listened to personal concerns and found ways to collaborate in the office.
I could communicate more naturally to seniors and the working condition felt better with a wider perspective on my senior\'s hidden supports.
>> I could communicate more naturally to seniors and the working conditions felt much better with a wider perspective on my senior\'s hidden supports.
>> I could communicate more naturally to seniors and the working conditions felt much better with a wider perspective on my senior\'s hidden supports.
The moment I am writing this short experience, firmed chemistry was possible because all of office members were open-minded to gather.
>> The moment I was writing this short experience, firmed chemistry was possible because all of the office members gathered open-mindedly.
>> The moment I was writing this short experience, firmed chemistry was possible because all of the office members gathered open-mindedly.
I wish I could meet people in a future company who are always opened to communicate together.
>> I wish I could meet people in the future company who are always open to communication together.
>> I wish I could meet people in the future company who are always open to communication together.
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