What do you need to do, so you could do a half day at work?
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I don\'t need to do in advance for the half day specially.
Only I need to record my working status in the computer program.
I don\'r need permission from others in school.
The school situation is the most important for me.
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Hi [이름],
Thank you for sharing your ideas!
Have a nice day!
Teacher ELLY.
What do you need to do, so you could do a half day at work?
I don\'t need to do in advance for the half day specially.
>>I don\'t need to schedule in advance just to have a half day.
>>I don\'t need to schedule in advance just to have a half day.
Only I need to record my working status in the computer program.
>>I only need to update the status in the computer program.
I don\'t need permission from others in school.
I don\'t need permission from others in school.
CORRECT!
or>>I don\'t need to get a permission from anyone in school.
The school situation is the most important for me.
The school situation is the most important for me.
>>The school\'s situation is the most important thing for me.
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