What do you need to prepare for a blind date?

2019-12-11 · 첨삭 강사 Pamela

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Before a blind date, I need to brush my teeth and hair. I should check where and when I will have the event. I also need to check if I packed my purse and phone. If I try to make up myself toooooo much, it will be worse than neat styling. Just a smile and clean clothes are enough for a blind date because I prefer to have a natural relationship. In a ddition, If I show my best look first, the things left for my partner are only inferior disappointing looks. Thus, I think I don\'t need to prepare many things for a blind date.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for consistently doing your homework [이름]! Keep it up.

~T. Pamela

Here are my corrections/alternative sentences for you:

Before a blind date, I need to brush my teeth and hair.

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or>>Before a blind date, I need to brush my teeth and comb my hair.

I should check where and when I will have the event.

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or>>I should check the schedule and the location of the blind date.

I also need to check if I packed my purse and phone.

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or>> I also need to check if I have my purse and phone with me.
If I try to make up myself toooooo much, it will be worse than neat styling.

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or>>If I try to put on too much make up, it will not look good.
Just a smile and clean clothes are enough for a blind date because I prefer to have a natural relationship.

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or>>Just wear clean clothes and keep on smiling while on a blind date is enough because I prefer to have a natural relationship.
In a ddition, If I show my best look first, the things left for my partner are only inferior disappointing looks.

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>>Good use of vocabularies here.
Thus, I think I don\'t need to prepare many things for a blind date.

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