What do you not like about the changing seasons?
학생이 쓴 원문
As seasons change, I care about my clothes.
So I buy wear and jacket or coat and so on every season,
Also as season change, I have to arrange all clothes in a drawers .
It is troublesome work.
Except for this I don\'t care change of seasons.
Thanks to liveing this country I can feel four seasons. Each of season has its charm.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss [이름]. Thank you for this. You\'re right, each season has its own charm.
- T. Beth
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As seasons change, I care about my clothes.>>>> correct
So I buy wear and jacket or coat and so on every season,
>>>> So I buy clothes to wear like jackets and coats for every season.
Also as season change, I have to arrange all clothes in a drawers .
>>>> OR: In addition, as seasons change, I have to arrange all clothes in the drawers.
It is troublesome work.
>>>> It is a troublesome work.
Except for this I don\'t care change of seasons.
>>>> Except for this, I don\'t care about the changes in seasons.
Thanks to liveing this country I can feel four seasons.
>>>> Thanks to living in this country, I can feel four seasons.
Each of season has its charm.
>>>> correct
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