What do you picture yourself doing 10 years from now?
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At that time, I am 30 years old in Korean age. In Korea, age 30 means the age that a person entered to society completely. I will probably be in the company through college and graduate school. The company will be a company related to chemistry. I will work hard as a member of the company and aim to be praised by the people. I hope that this becomes a reality.
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At that time, I am 30 years old in Korean age.
>> Correct!
In Korea, age 30 means the age that a person entered to society completely.
>> In Korea, 30 is the age at which a person has fully integrated into society.
I will probably be in the company through college and graduate school.
>> I will most likely be employed by the company after completing college and graduate school.
The company will be a company related to chemistry.
>> The company will be related to chemistry.
I will work hard as a member of the company and aim to be praised by the people.
>>As a company employee, I will work hard and strive to be recognized by the people.
I hope that this becomes a reality.
>> Correct!
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