What do you plan on doing this Valentine\'s Day?

2021-02-17 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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I will go to the famous restaurant near my house this Valentine\'s day. and then My wife said that give to me Chocolate. When night comes, I will prepare for work the next day.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. [이름]tina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I will go to the famous restaurant near my house this Valentine\'s day.

>> CORRECT!
and then My wife said that give to me Chocolate.

>> My wife told me to give her chocolates.
When night comes, I will prepare for work the next day.

>> When the night comes, I will prepare for work for the next day.

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