What do you prefer, a tea, coffee, juice or cola and why?
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When I was 20, 21, I like to drink cola.
>>When I was in my 20\'s I like to drink cola.
Because it is sweet and I liked the feeling which carbonated drink touch to throat.
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When I was young, I did\'t like coffee because it is very bitter.
>>When I was young, I didn\'t like coffee because it is very bitter.
So, when I was very third and I can\'t endure to sleep anymore, I drunk a sweet coffee like cafe mocha.
>> So, when I was very adult and I can\'t endure to sleep anymore, I drunk a sweet coffee like cafe mocha.
I didn\'t drink a americano.
>> I didn\'t drink Americano.
However, I prefer a coffee more than cola.
>>However, I prefer a cup of coffee more than cola.
First, I should study hard.
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But, it is very difficult to study for a long time every day.
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Especially, I feel sleepy after I eat a lunch.
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So, I solve this problem, I always drink a coffee.
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>>So, I solve this problem by drinking coffee.
It is good to overcome to sleep and I also felt that I can concentrate more after drinking a coffee.
>>CORRECT!
Thus, I enjoy to drink a coffee.
>>CORRECT!
Also, I knew the favor of americano.
>>Also, I knew the flavor of Americano.
It is very bitter for me first time, but it have toxicity to attract and come to mind continuously.
>>It is very bitter for the first time, but it has toxicity to attract and comes to mind continuously.
I want to drink coffee even if I don\'t be third.
>> I want to drink coffee even if I\'m not sleepy.
As if it is my habit, I always find it everyday.
>>CORRECT!
Now, it is essential for me.
>>CORRECT!
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