What do you prefer, a tea, coffee, juice or cola and why?

2020-01-13 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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When I was 20, 21, I like to drink cola. Because it is sweet and I liked the feeling which carbonated drink touch to throat. When I was young, I did\'t like coffee because it is very bitter. So, when I was very third and I can\'t endure to sleep anymore, I drunk a sweet coffee like cafe mocha. I didn\'t drink a americano. However, I prefer a coffee more than cola. First, I should study hard. But, it is very difficult to study for a long time every day. Especially, I feel sleepy after I eat a lunch. So, I solve this problem, I always drink a coffee. It is good to overcome to sleep and I also felt that I can concentrate more after drinking a coffee. Thus, I enjoy to drink a coffee. Also, I knew the favor of americano. It is very bitter for me first time, but it have toxicity to attract and come to mind continuously. I want to drink coffee even if I don\'t be third. As if it is my habit, I always find it everyday. Now, it is essential for me.

강사 첨삭

Thank you Se [이름]!

~Teacher Lucy


When I was 20, 21, I like to drink cola.

>>When I was in my 20\'s I like to drink cola.

Because it is sweet and I liked the feeling which carbonated drink touch to throat.
>>CORRECT!
When I was young, I did\'t like coffee because it is very bitter.

>>When I was young, I didn\'t like coffee because it is very bitter.
 So, when I was very third and I can\'t endure to sleep anymore, I drunk a sweet coffee like cafe mocha.

>> So, when I was very adult and I can\'t endure to sleep anymore, I drunk a sweet coffee like cafe mocha.

 I didn\'t drink a americano.

>> I didn\'t drink Americano.

However, I prefer a coffee more than cola.
>>However, I prefer a cup of coffee more than cola.
First, I should study hard.

>>CORRECT!

 But, it is very difficult to study for a long time every day.

>>CORRECT!

Especially, I feel sleepy after I eat a lunch.

>>CORRECT!

So, I solve this problem, I always drink a coffee.

>>CORRECT!

>>So, I solve this problem by drinking coffee.

It is good to overcome to sleep and I also felt that I can concentrate more after drinking a coffee.

>>CORRECT!

 Thus, I enjoy to drink a coffee.
>>CORRECT!
Also, I knew the favor of americano.

>>Also, I knew the flavor of Americano.

It is very bitter for me first time, but it have toxicity to attract and come to mind continuously.

>>It is very bitter for the first time, but it has toxicity to attract and comes to mind continuously.

 I want to drink coffee even if I don\'t be third.

>> I want to drink coffee even if I\'m not sleepy.

 As if it is my habit, I always find it everyday.
>>CORRECT!
Now, it is essential for me.

>>CORRECT!

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