What do you prefer, to eat everything you like, drink a lot, smoke, have no physical exercise and di
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Prevention is the best policy to keep healthy. I perfer the latter. Now we are living in the contaminated world mentaly and physically. We should be cautious for almost everything not to get diseases easily and fast. For our wellbeings we had better do our best. More broadly, we stirve for humankind. Then I can relax and rely on my destiny for the rest of my life.
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Prevention is the best policy to keep healthy.
>> Prevention is the best policy to keep one\'s health.
I perfer the latter.
>> You use \'latter\' when there are two items listed or mentioned.
Now we are living in the contaminated world mentaly and physically.
>> We are all living in the mentally and physically contaminated world.
We should be cautious for almost everything not to get diseases easily and fast.
>> We should be cautious about almost everything so as not to get diseases or illnesses easily and fast.
For our wellbeings, we had better do our best.
>> correct
More broadly, we strive for humankind.
>> correct
Then I can relax and rely on my destiny for the rest of my life.
>> correct
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