What do you really hate having to do in your free time?
학생이 쓴 원문
I hate studying during my free time.
I need to rest in my free time with the things that I really wanted to do.
But if someone tells me that you should study during it, then I will be so mad about it.
Because studying is not a thing that I really want, and also I need to use my brain if I am going to study.
Because of these reasons, I hate studying during my free time.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Another composition well-written! See you tomorrow! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>CORRECT!
I need to rest in my free time with the things that I really wanted to do.
I need to rest in my free time with the things that I really wanted to do.
>>CORRECT!
But if someone tells me that you should study during it, then I will be so mad about it.
But if someone tells me that you should study during it, then I will be so mad about it.
>>But if someone tells me that I should study during that, then I would be so mad about it.
Because studying is not a thing that I really want, and also I need to use my brain if I am going to study.
Because studying is not a thing that I really want, and also I need to use my brain if I am going to study.
>>CORRECT!
Because of these reasons, I hate studying during my free time.
Because of these reasons, I hate studying during my free time.
>>CORRECT!
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