What do you really hate having to do in your free time?
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Normally in free time, everything is fun.
>> Normally, in my free time is fun.
Reading books, watching movies, meeting my friends…
>> Reading books, watching movies and meeting my friends.
Nevertheless, if I find some dislike, it is time-wasting.
>> Nevertheless, if I find some dislikes, it is time-wasting.
Maybe you can have a question, because free time is free time and it\'s not for a production something.
>> Maybe you\'ll be questioned about it, but free time is free time and it\'s not a time for being productive.
But when I read some bad and fake news with a lot of absurd comments, I feel truly upset.
>> But whenever I read some bad and fake news with a lot of absurd comments, I truly feel upset.
And it is also unhelpful to read time-wasting, too common and boring blog text.
>> CORRECT!
We don\'t need to be too much productive, but I would like to use my time on self enrichment.
>> CORRECT!
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