What do you say when you want to invite someone to your party?
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi~ my friend. Could you come to my home for my party this weekend?
If you get together with me, I will be happy.
I really hope to see you then. Bye~
강사 첨삭
Good day, [이름]!
If you get together with me, I will be happy.
I really hope to see you then. Bye~
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. CamilleHi~ my friend.
>>Hi, my friend!
Could you come to my home for my party this weekend?
>> CORRECT!
If you get together with me, I will be happy.
>> If you could come to my party, I would be happy.
I really hope to see you then. Bye~
>> CORRECT!
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