What do you spend most of your money on?
학생이 쓴 원문
I spend most of my money to buy books. I like reading, when I read some books, any book is useful, I buy it. Next spending thing is clothing. I want to be a fashionista, I buy many clothes to match shoes and bags.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]! That\'s lovely. Books and clothes are things I\'m also fond of! Thank you for sharing.
-T. Sonny
I spend most of my money to buy books.
>>I spend most of my money on books.
I like reading, when I read some books, any book is useful, I buy it.
>>I like reading; when I read books, I find all of them useful so I buy them.
Next spending thing is clothing.
>>Next thing I spend most on is clothes.
I want to be a fashionista, I buy many clothes to match shoes and bags.
>>I want to be a fashionista so I buy many clothes to match my shoes and bags.
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