What do you spend your day thinking about most? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I spend time to accomplish my daily work and manage relationship of costumers.
In addition, I think about the rest of my future life ,how to live, what to do, where to Iive.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름]!
I\'m glad you have thought about the topic.
I\'m glad to see your reasoning.
I look forward to hearing more of your opinions.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I spend time to accomplish my daily work and manage relationship of costumers.
>> I spend time to accomplish my daily work and manage relationships with customers.
In addition, I think about the rest of my future life ,how to live, what to do, where to Iive.
In addition, I think about the rest of my future life ,how to live, what to do, where to Iive.
>> In addition, I think about the rest of my future life like thinking about how to live, what to do and where to live.
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