What do you talk about with your friends?
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What do you talk about with your friends?
Most of my friends have their own families and they are working as intermediate managers in their companies.
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or>>A lot of my friends are already married with children and they have managerial positions in their respective companies.
Therefore, we usually find the topic to chat together from the family and the work.
>>Therefore, we usually chat together on topics about family and work.
However, a little sad aspect of our conversation, we already know these sources are about monotonous routines and sighing for hectic lives.
>>However, there is a little sad aspect on our conversations, we already know that these are about monotonous routines and hectic lives.
The most common question when I meet them is ‘Do you have anything special?’
>>The most common question we all ask when we meet is, ‘Do you have anything special?
Moreover, the uncertainty of our future, though they have decent jobs, make us gloomier.
>>Moreover, due to the uncertainty of our future, although we already have decent jobs, it still makes us feel gloomy.
I think we are still young to lose our vigor, but I might have to agree that people in this age, late 30’s, should start reaching a plateau and they should need to adjust to this lifestyle.
>>I think we are still young to lose our vigor. But I might have to agree that people in their late 30’s, should start reaching a plateau and they need to adjust to this lifestyle.
Because they are satisfied in their lives.
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or>>Because they have found satisfaction in their current lives.
They have lovely family members and every co-worker is appreciated their expertise, but this is just a little boing.
>>They have lovely family members and all their co-workers appreciate their expertise at work, but I think this is just a little boring.
Compared to our previous days, we enjoy our stories differently.
>>Compared to our lives in previous days, we are enjoying our own stories differently.
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