What do you thing is the most common crime in your contry?why??
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I agree that the society nowadays is getting scarier because people are getting more and more selfish.
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I think the most common crime is a murder in my country.
>> I think the most common crime in my country is murder.
I don\'t know Perpetrator\'s psychology.
>> I don\'t know much about a perpetrator\'s psychology.
But present situation, people disgust other people and deeper than indivisulism.
>> But in the present situation, people disgust each other on a deeper level than individualism.
So people do\'t think other person.
>> So people don\'t care about other people.
The present situation is get worse, so i am scared.
>> The present situation is getting worse so I am scared.
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