What do you think about arranged marriage?
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If you want to try arranged marriage, I don\'t think it\'s a bad way how to find a fiancé. On the other hand, your parents or friends enforce you will do it even if you don\'t want to do that. Just, I believe it depends on your mind whatever you want or not. There is no one who enforces you and that\'s why I left in Korea. All of my relative tend to ask me when you get marriage? , Do you have a girlfriend?, and you have to get marriage early as soon as possible. I really hate listening to that words. :)
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Hi, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
If you want to try arranged marriage, I don\'t think it\'s a bad way how to find a fiancé.
>> CORRECT!
On the other hand, your parents or friends enforce you will do it even if you don\'t want to do that.
>> CORRECT!Just, I believe it depends on your mind whatever you want or not.
>> Just, I believe it depends on your mind, whether you like it or not.
There is no one who enforces you and that\'s why I left in Korea.
>> There is no one who enforces you and that\'s why I left Korea.
All of my relative tend to ask me when you get marriage? , Do you have a girlfriend?, and you have to get marriage early as soon as possible.
>> All of my relatives tend to ask me, \"when will you get married?\", \"Do you have a girlfriend?\", and \"you have to get married early as soon as possible\".
I really hate listening to that words. :)
I really hate listening to that words. :)
>> CORRECT!
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