What do you think about dating a friend's ex-girlfriend or ex-boyfriend
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It sounds odd to date a friends’ ex. If two of you see each other without your friend involved, it could be okay. But if you keep maintaining the relationship with your friend, there will be times that you should see your love one with your friend together. Then, would your friend and your boy or girl friend feel comfortable seeing each other again? Probably not. So, if two of you really love each other, you have to be willing to cease the relationship with your friend. You cannot have both of them. In order to get something, there are things that you have to give up. Furthermore, there is a thing that you have to take into account. Will your decision be supported by your other friends? If not, there is a risk that you might lose your other friends as well. Life is not that simple as you think. We do not live here in this society by ourselves. We are living together with others. The relationships we build and maintain can affect us in all aspects of life. Humans are social animals.
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Teacher Nina
It sounds odd to date a friends’ ex.
>> Correct!
If two of you see each other without your friend involved, it could be okay.
>> If the two of you see each other without your friend involved, it could be okay.
But if you keep maintaining the relationship with your friend, there will be times that you should see your love one with your friend together.
>> Correct!
Then, would your friend and your boy or girl friend feel comfortable seeing each other again?
>> Correct!
Probably not. So, if two of you really love each other, you have to be willing to cease the relationship with your friend.
>> Correct!
You cannot have both of them.
>> Correct!
In order to get something, there are things that you have to give up.
>> Correct!
Furthermore, there is a thing that you have to take into account.
>> Correct!
Will your decision be supported by your other friends?
>> Correct!
If not, there is a risk that you might lose your other friends as well.
>> Correct!
Life is not that simple as you think.
>> Correct!
We do not live here in this society by ourselves.
>> Correct!
We are living together with others.
>> Correct!
>> OR: We are living with other people.
The relationships we build and maintain can affect us in all aspects of life.
>> Correct!
Humans are social animals.
>> Correct!
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