What do you think about Electronic Music Festivals like Tomorrowland?
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I don\'t really understand what that is, so I can\'t comment on this question. But if it is just a normal music festival, I would like it regardless of its disadvantages.
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What do you think about Electronic Music Festivals like Tomorrowland?
I don\'t really understand what that is, so I can\'t comment on this question.
>> OR: Considering that I\'m clueless about this particular festival, it\'s hard to put in my two cents.
But if it is just a normal music festival, I would like it regardless of its disadvantages.
>> OR: Having said that, assu[이름]g that electronic festivals are just like other music festivals, then I believe I\'d be one happy festival-goer despite its drawbacks.
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