What do you think about extreme sports?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think it is so boring to me.
I don’t like any sports, so it also boring.
But I respect the people who do well on extreme sports.
If I do well on sports, I will be able to like extreme sports.
But I should work out to be healthier.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] Hu!
I also think the same. Extreme sports are dangerous and I want to live for a long time hahaha. Anyway, good job again today. See you tomorrow! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>I think it is so boring.
I don’t like any sports, so it also boring.
I don’t like any sports, so it also boring.
>>I don’t like any sports, so it is also boring.
But I respect the people who do well on extreme sports.
But I respect the people who do well on extreme sports.
>>But I respect the people who do well in extreme sports.
If I do well on sports, I will be able to like extreme sports.
If I do well on sports, I will be able to like extreme sports.
>>If I do well in sports, I will be able to like extreme sports.
But I should work out to be healthier.
But I should work out to be healthier.
>>CORRECT!
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