What do you think about foreign language learning as a hobby? What (other) language would you like t
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It seems to be true of me to learn a foreign language as a hobby. My wife sometimes said it is good for me because I have a very useful hobby. After mastering English to some extent, I would learn Japanese because Japan is so close to our country that a vast of tourists from
two countries have visited each other. Japanese skills will give more chances to make Japanese friends and to have a business for Japanese.
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Good evening, Steve. Thank you once again for making an effort to check out the homework and express your thoughts on the topic. I hope you have a good night. ~Jane c\",
It seems to be true of me to learn a foreign language as a hobby.
>> CORRECT =)
My wife sometimes said it is good for me because I have a very useful hobby.
>> CORRECT =)
After mastering English to some extent, I would learn Japanese because Japan is so close to our country that a vast of tourists from two countries have visited each other.
>> After mastering English to some extent, I would learn Japanese because Japan is so close to our country that a vast number of tourists from the two countries have visited each other.
Japanese skills will give more chances to make Japanese friends and to have a business for Japanese.
>> Japanese skills will give me more chances to make Japanese friends and to have a business for the Japanese.
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