What do you think about GMO (Genetically modified organisms) ? Is it okay for humans to eat or drink
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GMO-food is made by humans, who want to earn more money. All plants get bigger and taller, so they harvest mass products for the people. It’s not natural cycle, it’s artificial. Definitely, it is not good for human health. We should avoid to eat them.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
You are right! It\'s scary how so much of what we eat nowadays are artificial. Let\'s be more picky of what we eat. Anyway, good job with your composition as usual. See you later in class! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>CORRECT!
2. All plants get bigger and taller, so they harvest mass products for the people.
>>The plants get bigger than its usual size and they mass produce them for the people.
3. It’s not natural cycle, it’s artificial. Definitely, it is not good for human health.
>>CORRECT!
4. We should avoid to eat them.
>>We should avoid eating them.
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