What do you think about how Moon Jae In is handling the COVID-19 crisis?
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I think that Moon Jae in isn\'t handling the COVID-19 crisis well. Because he doesn\'t care about the danger of school. I don\'t agree about his opinion. I think that his reacting made this terrible situtation.
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I think that Moon Jae in isn\'t handling the COVID-19 crisis well. Because he doesn\'t care about the danger of school.
>> I think that Moon Jae in isn\'t handling the COVID-19 crisis well because he doesn\'t care about the dangers students would encounter at school.
I don\'t agree about his opinion.
>> I don\'t agree with his opinion.
I think that his reacting made this terrible situtation.
>> I think that his decisions made this situation terrible.
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