What do you think about it?

2010-02-18 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

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Company I work has some of lisencing product. One of them is Mediaven tab. from swissland. Now,I'm a contact person in charge of Mediaven tab. In fact there was a manager. But the manager left company. so, unfortunately I communicate with him by e-mail. Last month inspection, FKDA found Mediaven's barcode is wrong. So we puted a sticker on imported stock and informed new barcode. Today I got the reply from him. He wrote that he has on stack are packed. So I worte "If you have stock of package material, we would like to know whether you can put a barcode sticker on packed boxes instead of unpacking and repacking. We can send the barcode sticker. If all the above is possible,“new”package material can be applied after stock materials be exhausted." What do you think about it?

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Company I work has some of lisencing product.>> The company I work for has some licensed product. One of them is Mediaven tab. from swissland.>> One of them is Mediaven tab. from Swissland. (Maybe you mean Switzerland) In fact there was a manager. But the manager left company. so, unfortunately I communicate with him by e-mail. >> In fact there was a manager but the manager left the company so, unfortunately I communicate with him by e-mail. Last month inspection, FKDA found Mediaven's barcode is wrong. >> On last month’s inspection, FKDA found Mediaven's barcode wrong. So we puted a sticker on imported stock and informed new barcode. >> So we put a sticker on the imported stock and informed him with the new barcode. He wrote that he has on stack are packed. >> He wrote that what he has on stock are packed. If all the above is possible,“new”package material can be applied after stock materials be exhausted.">> If all the above is possible, “new” package material can be applied after stock materials can be exhausted."

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