What do you think about living alone? Do you think it is good or bad?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think there are merits and disadvantages in living alone.
First of all, lf I live alone, I can guarantee my privacy
Second I can live more freely without concerning about how others think of me.
Third, personally I like the quiteness in being alone.
Otherwise, the most bad things in living alone is that I feel loneliness.
And there is no one who can call ambulance and take me hospital when I was in condition of urgent illness.
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I think there are merits and disadvantages in living alone.
>> I think there are merits and disadvantages to living alone.
First of all, lf I live alone, I can guarantee my privacy
>> First, if I live alone, I can guarantee my privacy.
Second I can live more freely without concerning about how others think of me.
>> Second, I can live more freely without having concerns about how others think of me.
Third, personally I like the quiteness in being alone
>> Third, personally I like the quietness in being alone.
Otherwise, the most bad things in living alone is that I feel loneliness.
>> Otherwise, the worst thing about living alone is that I feel lonely.
OR>> >> Otherwise, the worst thing about living alone is that I loneliness.
And there is no one who can call ambulance and take me hospital when I was in condition of urgent illness.
>> And there is no one who can call an ambulance and take me to the hospital when I\'m in a condition of an urgent illness.
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