What do you think about long distance relationships?
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To be honestly, I don\'t think it\'s a good thing. There is saying in my country when you\'re out of your body, you\'re out of your mind. I strongly agree with it because I have an experience as it. I used to meet her, it took 2 hours and 30 minutes by a train. At the first time, I thought I can take it. But, it\'s not a reality, I wasn\'t sure whether my ex-girlfriend loved me or not. And, I started to doubt about her sayings because I can\'t know about it. So, I respect the couples who do a long distance date between country and country.
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Hi, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
To be honestly, I don\'t think it\'s a good thing.
>> To be honest, I don\'t think it\'s a good thing.
OR >> In all honesty, I don\'t think it\'s a good thing.
There is saying in my country when you\'re out of your body, you\'re out of your mind.
>> There is a saying in my country when you\'re out of your body, you\'re out of your mind.
I strongly agree with it because I have an experience as it.
>> I strongly agree with it because I have an experience as it was.
I used to meet her, it took 2 hours and 30 minutes by train.
>> CORRECT!At the first time, I thought I can take it.
>> CORRECT!But, it\'s not a reality, I wasn\'t sure whether my ex-girlfriend loved me or not.
>> CORRECT!And, I started to doubt about her sayings because I can\'t know about it.
>> And, I started to doubt about what she said because I am not sure about it.
OR >> >> And, I started to doubt the words she said because I am not sure about it.
So, I respect the couples who do a long distance date between country and country.
>> CORRECT!
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