What do you think about (not) having hobbies?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think it\'s bad not to have hobbies.Because if I don\'t have a hobby, I don\'t have anything to do and It feels like I\'m wasting my time.
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I think it\'s bad not to have hobbies.
>> CORRECT!
Because if I don\'t have a hobby, I don\'t have anything to do and It feels like I\'m wasting my time.
>> Because if I don\'t have a hobby, I don\'t have anything to do and it feels like I\'m wasting my time.
OR>> If I don\'t have a hobby, I don\'t have anything to do in my free time and it feels like I\'m wasting my time.
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