What do you think about people who work for cash and receive welfare as well?

2014-10-17 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I am not sure whether I understand the question correctly or not. If the question means that someone receives welfare illegally although he/she has a job, then it is the problem because the welfare system has been intended to help people who are not able to work for valid reasons. If the question refers to people who receive welfare and work to earn money without violating laws, I do not see any problems. Shouldn’t we encourage people who receive welfare to work? Many governments actually run various rehabilitation programs for homeless people who receive welfare. We have to teach those people how to fish rather than just giving them fish, so that they can live by themselves without help from others. There are countries that have great welfare systems, but they suffer from the side effect that people do not make effort to get a job, instead they depend on the welfare. Who want to sweat over hard work even though you are given money from the government?

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Hi there Sir [이름]! T.G.I.F. ^^ Our most awaited day. !!! Actually, you understood the question correctly. You even elaborated your thoughts. Great! Of course, I won\'t work if I\'m going to receive money from the government. Hihihi. I would rather relax and have time with my family. Your opinions are greatly appreciated. Enjoy the rest of the day. Teacher Nina   I am not sure whether I understand the question correctly or not. >> CORRECT If the question means that someone receives welfare illegally although he/she has a job, then it is the problem because the welfare system has been intended to help people who are not able to work for valid reasons. >> CORRECT >> OR: If the question means that someone receives welfare illegally although he/she has a job, then it is the problem because the system has been intended to help people who are not able to work for valid reasons. If the question refers to people who receive welfare and work to earn money without violating laws, I do not see any problems. >> CORRECT  Shouldn’t we encourage people who receive welfare to work? >> CORRECT Many governments actually run various rehabilitation programs for homeless people who receive welfare. >> CORRECT We have to teach those people how to fish rather than just giving them fish, so that they can live by themselves without help from others. >> CORRECT >> OR: We have to teach those people how to fish rather than just giving them fish, so that they can live by themselves without asking help from others. There are countries that have great welfare systems, but they suffer from the side effect that people do not make effort to get a job, instead they depend on the welfare. >> CORRECT Who want to sweat over hard work even though you are given money from the government? >> Who want to sweat over hard work even though you are given money by the government? >> OR: Who want to sweat because of working hard even though you receive money from the government.

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