What do you think about reality shows? Would you participate in one if you were invited?
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Watching a reality show is so funny.
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I think there is script to do, it is still interesting to watch.
>> Even though reality shows are probably scripted, I still find them interesting to watch.
When I watch movie or drama, I feel it like just show. But when I see reality show. It seems more real. It could be my friends`s story or sometime it could be mine.
>> When I watch a movie, like drama, I feel like it\'s just a show.
I would like to join reality show, Yes I want to, specially Jungle thing, or show about Love.
>> I would like to join a reality show, I really do, especially if the setting is done in the jungles or if it\'s something about love.
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