What do you think about “Robin Hood”-type thieves who steal from the rich to help the poor?
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What do you think about “Robin Hood”-type thieves who steal from the rich to help the poor?
I thought that he was a hero for ours when I was in childhood.
These days, after being adult, I’m curious whether it is correct or not.
Rich also tried to get it what they wnat to.
In a way, They might have taken an exceptional effort.
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I thought that he was a hero for ours when I was in childhood.
These days, after being adult, I’m curious whether it is correct or not.
Rich also tried to get it what they wnat to.
>> Rich people also try to get what they want.
>> I thought he was our hero when I was a child.
These days, after being adult, I’m curious whether it is correct or not.
>> These days, as an adult, I wonder whether that was really correct or not.
Rich also tried to get it what they wnat to.
>> Rich people also try to get what they want.
In a way, They might have taken an exceptional effort.
>> In a way, they might have made exceptional efforts to achieve their goals.
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