What do you think about taking a nap? How about sleeping in?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think taking a nap is good to us. Taking nap has a lot of advantages. Taking nap improves our memory and learning skills. And,napping reduces stress and improves mental health. Naps help improve our health. Getting enough rest strengthens our immune system and helps prevent diseases. So, we should take a nap if we can take.
강사 첨삭
Hello,[이름] U!
Great point! You did well in writing your homework. Keep it up!
With that said, I think I will sleep more! Kidding aside.
With that said, I think I will sleep more! Kidding aside.
-T.Jhozel
I think taking a nap is good to us.
>> I think that taking a nap is helpful to us.
Taking nap has a lot of advantages.
>> Correct!
Taking nap improves our memory and learning skills.
>> Taking a nap improves our memory and learning abilities.
And,napping reduces stress and improves mental health.
>> Furthermore, napping reduces stress and improves mental health.
Naps help improve our health.
>> Napping is beneficial to our health.
Getting enough rest strengthens our immune system and helps prevent diseases.
>> Correct!
So, we should take a nap if we can take.
>> So, if possible, we should take a nap.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.