What do you think about taking a nap? How about sleeping in?
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Some people like taking a nap. It’s good to efficiency to work. But I don’t like nap. because I can’t sleep well at the night. And sleeping in on weekends with nothing is good. But to sleeping in when i have promise friends or weekdays is worst.
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Some people like taking a nap.
>>> correct
It’s good to efficiency to work.
>>> It’s good for efficiency at work.
But I don’t like nap. because I can’t sleep well at the night.
>>> However, I don’t like napping because I can’t sleep well at night.
And sleeping in on weekends with nothing is good.
>>> And sleeping in on weekends with nothing planned or anything to do is good.
But to sleeping in when i have promise friends or weekdays is worst.
>>> But to sleeping in when I have appointments with friends or weekdays is terrible.
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