What do you think about technologies taking over people's lives? Why are we so dependent on it? Woul

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YOU SAY:

That is good question

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That is a good question.

YOU SAY:

 In my opinion, many people uses technologies for convenience.

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I mean, When we spend time enjoying our holiday or something , we just look for phone, Tv or laptop.

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What I mean is when we spend time enjoying our holiday, we normally use our phones, watch television or use the laptop.

YOU SAY:

Actually, There are many programs that is very excited in the media .

BETTER SAY:

Actually there are many programs that are exciting for the media.

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That\'s why They use them.

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But I think , If we use them too much, we can\'t do anything with out them.

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and I heard that electromagetic waves are not good for health

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And I heard that electro magnetic ware are not good for our health.

YOU SAY:

with out them is inconvenience

BETTER SAY:

Without the use of technology it is very inconvenient.

YOU SAY:

But we can use time more preciously like eating food face to face with family or friends .

BETTER SAY:

But we can use our time more effectively like spending time with our family and friends. Doing something together like eating.