What do you think about the health care system in your country?
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I just heard it from MORNING SPECIAL on EBS programs that it is a safe place to get hurt during the travel in Korea. It means that the system is good. I heard that many foreign vistors are satisfied with the korean health caresystem and korean medical is famous for cancer treatment.
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I just heard it from MORNING SPECIAL on EBS programs that it is a safe place to get hurt during the travel in Korea.
>> I just heard it from MORNING SPECIAL on EBS programs that people need not worry when they get hurt during their travels in Korea.
It means that the system is good.
>> correct
I heard that many foreign vistors are satisfied with the korean health caresystem and korean medical is famous for cancer treatment.
>> I heard that many foreign visitors are satisfied with the Korean healthcare system and the medical field is famous for cancer treatment.
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