What do you think about the health care system in your country? How could it be improved?
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Korea\'s Health Care System is second to none. Good welfare, insurance. Everything is well controlled. Also hospitals and health insurances are nationalized. So I can\'t pin point the flaw because, I haven\'t thought about Health Care System. Ummmm....Actually this kind of topic is hard for me....To answer...
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Korea\'s Health Care System is second to none. Good welfare, insurance.
>>> Korea\'s Health Care System is second to none. Good welfare and good health insurance.
Everything is well controlled. Also hospitals and health insurances are nationalized.
>>> Everything is well controlled. Also, hospitals and health insurance are nationalized.
So I can\'t pin point the flaw because, I haven\'t thought about Health Care System. Ummmm....Actually this kind of topic is hard for me....To answer...
>>> So I can\'t pinpoint the flaw because I haven\'t thought about the Health Care System. Ummmm....Actually this kind of topic is hard for me....To answer...
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